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1 How to improve on my Girlsense Cartoons? on Tue Feb 07, 2012 5:50 am

MasterMidnight

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So I've been racking up my ideas on cartoons for a little, and I made a few cutouts.... If you have any critique for me, please do let me know! ^-^ I'm looking for a good way to improve...
This is one that i made awhile back...sorta cut oddly in the shirt thing, and the fingers really came out weirdly..Wish i could redo it. Have any other suggestions? :

This cartoon is one I just made two weeks back. I'm probably going to use it in my new btq theme. Her hat sorta looks sad Lol, other than that....everything took a course on it's own. :3


Hmm...This can't be really considered a cutout, can it? lol I sorta wanted to test out that shading method people use with the shading tools (like for dress shades), and i guess this is the product of it? I'm not sure if i am all interested in it, might remake it LOL but it will probably be in my next btq :

AND.... My last cutout that I've made awhile back...Sorta a good one I've made in awhile. ^-^ Lol if you have any advice, please do tell ^-^ I can always improve. Very Happy

That's all the cartoons I have done so far...(other than that weird chibi one I made one day when I was bored...Lol) Please do not hold back! :3


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2 Re: How to improve on my Girlsense Cartoons? on Tue Feb 07, 2012 10:46 am

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These all look great! ^_^ I would give you advice, but I have never made a single cutout in my life so... yeah. :3


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3 Re: How to improve on my Girlsense Cartoons? on Wed Feb 08, 2012 4:44 am

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@Doodle: That's alright. ^-^ Bring on the advice! =D


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4 Re: How to improve on my Girlsense Cartoons? on Sat Feb 11, 2012 4:54 am

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I would give advice but, I really stink at the cutout type of cartoons.... BUT I do know a little about the ( Figure type) character whose name some how has escraped my mind O_O .... For starters OMG SO CUTE! But if I were doing him I think I may have used like a light black shading under or around his ( Left in the pic ) leg. And the same for his arm and paw. And for the wing like things on his back I may have used a light black shading on like the inside parts of it... But that is just me, Personally I think he looks pretty good the way he is. ^_^


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5 Re: How to improve on my Girlsense Cartoons? on Sat Feb 11, 2012 8:49 am

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@Asteria: The Noise Rhyme? ^-^ Lol I'll try that next time :3 I think i might redo that one anyways so thanks for the advice ^-^ Lol I did use another contrasting color but i think it fades in a little too well so next time I'll be more drastic. :3 Thanks for the advice! =D


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6 Re: How to improve on my Girlsense Cartoons? on Sat Feb 11, 2012 7:36 pm

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wow these cartoons look amazing...thx master 4 the important advices...


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7 Re: How to improve on my Girlsense Cartoons? on Wed Feb 15, 2012 8:26 am

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Thanks for commenting, Miss D! :3 I am still just experimenting with different cartoons, sorta gets boring after awhile making the same thing lol (:


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8 Re: How to improve on my Girlsense Cartoons? on Sat Mar 24, 2012 2:24 am

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Lol, Midy your cartoons are Awesome. I need to get my butt in gear and go make Fangs outfit or something. I don't think I have seen my btq in a month O_O


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